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OMG
Date: 2009-09-17 08:54 pm (UTC)The beginning is perfectly linked with the ending of the movie, because of course you see the empty car when Sho and Kei are hiding down there. Excellent idea! Even the scene on the beach in the sunlight is - finally - explained. xD
This idea is just great and your writing style is great, it really fits the Moon Child story. And finally there's more sex. XD And it's well described... I like that.
Sorry, I don't know what else to say.
This is just gorgeous.